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Si Clarke
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The writing is good. The story is interesting. The editing leaves something to be desired. But now we can add transphobia and homophobia to the racism, misogyny, and ableism.
— Apr 01, 2022 03:20AM
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Si Clarke
is 12% done
This really needed a sensitivity reader (or probably several). So far we’ve got a slang-talking, ganja-smoking Rastafarian, the R-word, and stinky curry jokes.
Interesting story. Decent writing. Problematic.
— Mar 31, 2022 01:41PM
Interesting story. Decent writing. Problematic.
