January’s Reviews > Irresistible Attraction > Status Update
January
is 23% done
This isn't hitting yet. Too much telling and not enough showing.
— Mar 30, 2022 07:36PM
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January
is 73% done
This is boring! 😴 I don't understand how she accomplished this, it's a short story. 😐
— Mar 31, 2022 11:16AM
January
is 56% done
Something is missing from this story, the characters are stick figures and the steam is routine, dialogue is bland.
— Mar 31, 2022 08:26AM
