Elly’s Reviews > Vampire Bound: Complete Series, Books 1-4 > Status Update
Elly
is 24% done
End of Book One. I am really enjoying the character development of Vonnie, certainly her 'adultness', her ability to absorb what is happening to her and just get on with it. I fear we're still "too much in prot's head" space though, perhaps saving the word count to explore where Z has been, or Leo's past? The writing however is enjoyable & comments are based on quant, not qual. Where's Tink? haha!! <3
— Apr 03, 2022 06:05AM
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Elly
is 73% done
End of Book Three. I can't say more clearly that I really enjoy RA's writing; their style is excellent, something I can cozy into. Do I wish I had some more "accent" on Rans, or Leonides? sure; but their tone is still strong. However. Vonnie. we have a lot of recycled monologues between herself over the 3 books, and from even Z's thoughts. & her magic should be further developed by now. We'll end B4 with needing more
— Apr 04, 2022 08:38AM
Elly
is 49% done
End of Book Two. I do really enjoy the writing style & the world building & character development; what I am missing is the relationship building, especially when a Demon of Fate has been involved. I feel that whilst Vonnie's inner monologue does give us so much weight & vulnerability; and it's wonderful we're dealing with a 30yr old single Mum, the pace isn't as fast as I'd have hoped by this stage.
— Apr 04, 2022 03:28AM
