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The same old super villain explains his evil plans so that the good guy easily can stop said plans from happening trope. Lazy.
— Apr 06, 2022 09:51PM
FS
is 75% done
It's so funny how Abby's and Dane's conflict is resolved off screen in one summarizing sentence. "So, I told her everything."
And she immediately believes him and they are 100% cool again.
The book doesn't even bother to show their emotions or the hard journey in resolving this conflict. It felt sterile. Why setup this conflict when you don't want to earn the payoff at the resolution?
— Apr 06, 2022 09:45PM
And she immediately believes him and they are 100% cool again.
The book doesn't even bother to show their emotions or the hard journey in resolving this conflict. It felt sterile. Why setup this conflict when you don't want to earn the payoff at the resolution?
