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Bonnie
is starting
Looking for something fun and sexy, but really, this is so annoying so far, if it is supposed to be a historical - just the first page and already the language is FAR too full of overly modern phrasing and idioms - "it's not over until the fat lady sings" ? Use of "dollars" when it is supposed to be a theatre on Drury Lane?
— Apr 07, 2022 04:15PM
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Bonnie
is finished
Really only like 37 pages, the rest is an excerpt for another book.
— Apr 07, 2022 05:01PM
