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*Susannah took a deep breath before she spoke.
Reader Susannah did not take a deep breath. Susannah is dead. She is neither breathing nor speaking. Ines, however, the witness the police are speaking to, may well have breathed and spoke.
How is it that well established authors don't have robust editors/proof readers? How many people would have read that error and not corrected it?
— Apr 09, 2022 04:05AM
Reader Susannah did not take a deep breath. Susannah is dead. She is neither breathing nor speaking. Ines, however, the witness the police are speaking to, may well have breathed and spoke.
How is it that well established authors don't have robust editors/proof readers? How many people would have read that error and not corrected it?
Pen
is 16% done
*Susannah took a deep breath before speaking.
Reader, Susannah did not. Susannah is the corpse. Ines, the one the police were speaking to, did in fact fact a deep breath before speaking.
How do established writers not have robust editors/proofreaders?
— Apr 09, 2022 12:43AM
Reader, Susannah did not. Susannah is the corpse. Ines, the one the police were speaking to, did in fact fact a deep breath before speaking.
How do established writers not have robust editors/proofreaders?
