Cathy’s Reviews > The Jewels of Halstead Manor > Status Update
Cathy
is 7% done
The writing and descriptions are so vivid and cleverly written making it easy to be pulled into the scene, but done in such away as to not make the mind tired. Your eyes just joyfully role through the pages. You don't even realise just how quickly you inhale a page! I'm only at the beginning as I have just started but I really appreciate how it is clever without being exhausting!! Yes and yes!
— Apr 16, 2022 12:29PM
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Cathy
is 72% done
I want to know a lot more about Nick. The story is almost over and I feel as though our hero isn't as fleshed out as is necessary in order for me to root for him. There is room though for us to glean a little more if the writer takes that opening that is available at this point and transports us there. I think he is a lovely guy and we need to explore that a little bit more. Please don't fail me miss writer.
— May 05, 2022 12:20AM
