Adrian Rose’s Reviews > The Paris Apartment > Status Update

So far it’s not good so I don’t know why I keep reading it. The characters keep just describing themselves and how each other are with no room for the reader to decide how they feel about them themselves based off their actions. Also, too cliché and too much foreshadowing. They spend so much time saying “this place is not what it seems” without showing it. This author needs to learn to show not tell.