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It’s interesting. Normally I’m really annoyed with authors doing way too much describing what is happening, without actually showing the reader what’s happening. Here, the problem is the opposite. It’s almost entirely dialogue so far with very little description or explanation. It’s making it very hard to get into the story or imagine the setting or characters.
Apr 27, 2022 06:04AM
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