Lenaya Fallin’s Reviews > On His Knees > Status Update

Sigh. /me does math. So they met a week before Christmas and are declaring undying love on Jan 3. Not just realized it might be true. But full on declarations. I tried I did to hoist up my disbelief high enough to buy it. But I can’t. Not even when I take into account the superficial intensity bdsm can add. These men are both ciphers to me. Insta-love is not one my fave tropes

I am such a sap. Been sniffling through the last chapter

First time I’ve seen this excellent piece of advice in a BDSM romance; Getting to know the other submissives will be useful to you.

In spite of the fun in the writing, I have to do my BDSM PSA thing. For a dom to assume control of a sub, especially a brand new one, is seven kinds of wrong.
They’re putting themselves and the sub into a position where violating consent is inevitable.
Assuming control without it is already pushing the boundaries of appropriate consent. And goes way beyond the boundaries of explicit consent

And with this: The guy smelled mouthwateringly good, and Alex kinda wanted to beat his ass for it.
Kaye has quelled my need to bitch for a while. What a hotfunnysexy gem of a sentence

Skimming. Feels very retro bdsm and m/m. Also, Alex’s whole vibe in this scene feels wrong. Stilted, robotic. A som cutout rather than a real man