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Imme van Gorp
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Hmm this isn’t.. good.
The story doesn’t make any sense whatsoever; I mean, why on earth would Lauren become Jess’ coach??
And the relationship is very forced and isn’t based on anything real. It’s all more of a childhood fantasy. Their first date was so stiff and they only talked about fencing.
I also don’t like Lauren’s martyr attitude or Jess’ lack of a personality other than “i want lauren”.
— May 06, 2022 08:42AM
The story doesn’t make any sense whatsoever; I mean, why on earth would Lauren become Jess’ coach??
And the relationship is very forced and isn’t based on anything real. It’s all more of a childhood fantasy. Their first date was so stiff and they only talked about fencing.
I also don’t like Lauren’s martyr attitude or Jess’ lack of a personality other than “i want lauren”.
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