Nancy’s Reviews > The Girl Who Smiled Beads: A Story of War and What Comes After > Status Update
Nancy
is 80% done
I just can’t finish this. I’m not interested in anything about the characters and have to keep backtracking to reread. It’s poorly structured and jumps time periods constantly. That usually doesn’t bother me, but in this case it’s super distracting and chops up the story.
— May 07, 2022 01:45PM
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