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Stepheny
is on page 62 of 176
This writer seems to be focusing on how important a woman's weight is. "...the news of a woman being pregnant, especially a thin woman expecting.." And then later, "Where a thicker woman's body absorbs a pregnancy..."
I'm not familiar with pregnancy myself, but the author's assumpion that "thicker" women have an easier time with pregnancy kind of pisses me off.
— Sep 03, 2014 10:15AM
I'm not familiar with pregnancy myself, but the author's assumpion that "thicker" women have an easier time with pregnancy kind of pisses me off.
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Stepheny
is on page 127 of 176
40 pages. Hopefully I can finish this tonight or tomorrow! The release date is Tuesday! Cutting it close with this ARC. :(
— Sep 07, 2014 05:06PM
Stepheny
is on page 112 of 176
The police officer delivers terrible news- your spouse has died in the car accident you were just in(you were the driver) and the very next thing the police officer says is "What in the world is that smell?"
I'm sorry, but that does not seem AT ALL like how this would go down. I don't care if you were driving a food delivery vehicle.
— Sep 05, 2014 10:14AM
I'm sorry, but that does not seem AT ALL like how this would go down. I don't care if you were driving a food delivery vehicle.
Stepheny
is on page 86 of 176
Dear Mr. Loizeaux,
Please get a better editor. I'm available if you need me.
Sincerely,
Stepheny
— Sep 04, 2014 10:11AM
Please get a better editor. I'm available if you need me.
Sincerely,
Stepheny
Stepheny
is on page 49 of 176
So apparently this Rutgers Graduate and high school teacher hadn't ever heard of a black fly before coming to the Adirondacks. I guess I didn't realize upstate NY was the only place with black flies. Anyone know if there's truth in that?? Just seems odd to me.
— Aug 29, 2014 09:55AM
Stepheny
is on page 32 of 176
So you're a Rutgers graduate and a high school teacher but you don't know what a generator is? Hmmm. Not sure I can buy that. Useless detail that takes me out of the story.
— Aug 28, 2014 07:10PM
Stepheny
is on page 8 of 176
One chapter in and wow...the writing is not that good. I hope it improves as the story goes on. I hate having to give books bad reviews but if this doesn't get better I'm going to have to. *sigh*
— Aug 23, 2014 06:55AM
