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Going through part 2, and right now Ciro seems flat and two-dimensional. The things that are repeatedly told to us is that he likes girls, he's strong, and he wants to go back home. But I'm told this, not shown this, so...
— May 16, 2022 11:35PM
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Insiyah
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Plot is alright, but the author seems to continue telling instead of showing, and that's making the story flat. Also, the lack of any sense of timeline is really, really annoying me because this book is so spread out.
— May 17, 2022 01:20AM
