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Matt
Matt is 29% done
I wonder what the characters would sound like in my brain if I wasn't listening to this audiobook with this woman trying to force male voices without knowing how. they all sound like the annoying pubescent/teen boy character in a cartoon
May 17, 2022 03:57PM
Dead Mech (Apex Trilogy, #1)

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Matt
Matt is 75% done
There's a whole lot of totally unnecessary dialog. Just slows things down. rotating through super short scenes helps for the fast paced parts but doing the whole thing like that just doesn't work
Jul 05, 2022 01:45PM
Dead Mech (Apex Trilogy, #1)


Matt
Matt is 54% done
Here's an idea..instead of saying ""Yeah, that's true,' Masters agreed" why don't you just say..."Masters agreed"
Jul 05, 2022 11:49AM
Dead Mech (Apex Trilogy, #1)


Matt
Matt is 50% done
May 30, 2022 08:30PM
Dead Mech (Apex Trilogy, #1)


Matt
Matt is 42% done
May 19, 2022 06:31AM
Dead Mech (Apex Trilogy, #1)


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