Will’s Reviews > The Ballad of Perilous Graves > Status Update
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Pretty sure I'm done with this. But we'll give it another day or two.
Halfway in I'm not sure what's going on or how some of the characters even connect. Worse, we've started introducing new characters that don't connect, and the story's getting muddier by the page. While the culture and language worked extremely well, and the premise was interesting, the execution just was not there. For me, at least.
— May 21, 2022 07:11PM
Halfway in I'm not sure what's going on or how some of the characters even connect. Worse, we've started introducing new characters that don't connect, and the story's getting muddier by the page. While the culture and language worked extremely well, and the premise was interesting, the execution just was not there. For me, at least.
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