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Author seems worried about describing outfits than working on weak plot points.
— May 24, 2022 11:23PM
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So far it seems the author can’t walk across a room without 6 changes of narrative and some vague utterances of things that would be important to know. A bit of an exaggeration perhaps but it’s taken about 150 pages just to go from one venue to another.
As much as I love Arlo, she’s an idiot. She’d be happy to be lynched just so she’d feel included. “For me?!? You shouldn’t have!”
— May 24, 2022 08:09PM
As much as I love Arlo, she’s an idiot. She’d be happy to be lynched just so she’d feel included. “For me?!? You shouldn’t have!”

