Nicole’s Reviews > Midnight > Status Update

I don't know how she did it but the writing style clearly changed about 25 pages back. I have never read a book where that has happened. Kuddos to the author.

I need to make note of this- this story is written as if you are an invisible bystander, observing all that's happening and not being privy to any of the secrets.

Getting better. There seems to be more clarity of things. The flow of the wording is off at times and I'm still trying to figure out of this is purposeful.

These characters are so fickle. Typical youth. Loving the Pagan undertones.

The dialogue is a little hard to follow and it was a tad confusing but I'm really enjoying the story. Have to remember it's set in the 80's too.