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She just saw Hado smile when he's demonstrated to be a silhouette to her. There's been a lot of slips where she sees mortal expressions and I blame that on the editor, they should have caught that.

I thought nahadoth could hear everything in the night. Doesn't someone just have to say "hey these guys are the ones doing the killings and are the ones you're looking for"? I feel like a murder mystery doesn't quite match his power

Ngl I was really enjoying the different vibe and pacing from the first story and I don't love that this cult is so similar in structure and style from what was the entire fucking plot of the first book. It's like the worst part was brought back when I thought it was moved beyond

Is serymn and hado, scimina and naha? 🤔

Like I feel like as much plot has happened in 23% of this book as happened in the entirety of the first book gottdamn