Laura’s Reviews > One Bossy Proposal > Status Update

I just made it through 20ish pages of foreplay and sex. It almost made me quit. I enjoy a good fictional lay but holy shit. So many unnecessary words. So. Many. It's first person narration and when the heroine finally went "I couldn't put it [the bliss of what's apparently a large peen] into words to save my life" I was SO GLAD. But she did.

AND THEN THE HERO ASKS IF SHE ENJOYED IT ☠️