Allison’s Reviews > Enchanted Heart > Status Update

I feel confused and conflicted about the story. The writing is meh, definitely needs an editing overhaul. Story flow and consistency is just off.
It could be so much better. That's the sad part. The story actually seems interesting it just seems to be executed wrongly. With just a detailed editor, it would be so much better.
Information just seems to be splattered everywhere but yet no where at the same time.