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Finally! They’re having their first actual conversation.

Waking up next to Nash was something he’d wanted for a long time.

Really? You hardly know each other and have barely spoke a few dozen words to each other. There’s no emotional connection here and they’ve had sex once. It’s only been a week or two since the start of the book.

It feels like a fourth grader wrote this. Four sentences in a row start with “He.” Earlier, there was a string of sentences that started with “They.” Short simple sentences.