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Jo
Jo is 56% done
f/f lead. This is an in-between story. The dialogue with her boss is kind of cringey. Also, they had a whole scene in the cafeteria that just ...ended with neither person eating and....it should have been redone or removed cos, whattt.
Jun 07, 2022 09:59AM
The Griffin Mission (The Griffin Sanctuary #0.5)

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Jo
Jo is 2% done
I have been ranting and raving about the wrong book in these updates. ahahaah.
Jun 07, 2022 10:50AM
The Griffin Mission (The Griffin Sanctuary #0.5)


Jo
Jo is 59% done
Oops. I was writing my progress in the wrong book.
Jun 07, 2022 10:41AM
The Griffin Mission (The Griffin Sanctuary #0.5)


Jo
Jo is 59% done
also she was a dick to the dog trainer. the possessiveness she feels toward the clan she ..seems to have been forced to become apart of is annoying. I understand playing the part on a business front. But just lashing out willynilly is very immature.
Jun 07, 2022 10:05AM
The Griffin Mission (The Griffin Sanctuary #0.5)


Jo
Jo is 56% done
f/f lead romance/crush. Lady is divorced from her wife. Wants to focus on work. Has a crush on her boss.
This is an in-between story. The dialogue with her boss is kind of cringey. The boss acts like a teenager. Also, they had a whole scene in the cafeteria that just ...ended with neither person eating and....it should have been redone or removed cos, whattt.
Jun 07, 2022 10:01AM
The Griffin Mission (The Griffin Sanctuary #0.5)


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