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Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~ is finished
When you finally limp over the finish line but everyone's gone home. That's this ending. 🙈
Jun 13, 2022 03:40PM
Adrift (Staying Afloat #1)

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Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~ is 88% done
This is when you have to asked if having only one POV is worth it.

Pro: It's easier for the author to keep track of.
Con: When you really need to know what's happening elsewhere, you have to deliver it afterward in a monologue (I'm assuming), thus losing all momentum of the climax.
Jun 13, 2022 11:36AM
Adrift (Staying Afloat #1)


Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~ is 38% done
This is a pretty standard space drama so far. Not really feeling the chemistry between the MCs either.
Jun 11, 2022 08:05AM
Adrift (Staying Afloat #1)


Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~
Linda ~ they got the mustard out! ~ is 8% done
Star system. In almost every star system. Not solar system. 🤦🏻‍♀️ There's only one solar system, because we call our star Sol.
Jun 09, 2022 10:36AM
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