Sandy JC’s Reviews > Tempt the Hookup > Status Update
Sandy JC
is 60% done
60% in and nothings happening.
I feel like the story has potential but it’s not written that well. I mean yes I’m rooting for them to be together but there’s zero tension between the two main characters. Many situations are described way too detailed. E.g. she spends a day in the spa and she describes what the interior design looks like and she goes on and on about what treatments she get. Like I don’t care
— Jun 20, 2022 06:13AM
I feel like the story has potential but it’s not written that well. I mean yes I’m rooting for them to be together but there’s zero tension between the two main characters. Many situations are described way too detailed. E.g. she spends a day in the spa and she describes what the interior design looks like and she goes on and on about what treatments she get. Like I don’t care
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