Heather Ordover’s Reviews > The House in the Cerulean Sea > Status Update

Stalled and likely not going back to it. I'm having a hard time. It feels like every page I read has something on it where I'm frustrated and saying "WHY didn't you hire an editor?" (or a really good editor...or take the advice of your editor!). Tonal inconsistencies, flaws in character logic, and an inability to convince me that the narrator was...well...who he says he is (physically or emotionally). V disappointed.