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Honest question for those who read my updates. Please clarify this for me.
My Yamaha was parked underground. I swapped it out for the Ninja I’d ridden to Bristol. It was faster and, like my cupboard upstairs, had a concealed compartment for carrying illegal weapons.
This means he’s riding the Ninja, correct? NOT the Yamaha. Am I misunderstanding this?
— Jun 22, 2022 03:02PM
My Yamaha was parked underground. I swapped it out for the Ninja I’d ridden to Bristol. It was faster and, like my cupboard upstairs, had a concealed compartment for carrying illegal weapons.
This means he’s riding the Ninja, correct? NOT the Yamaha. Am I misunderstanding this?
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Jun 22, 2022 05:50PM
It is confusing! I had to read it several times to make sense of it. I replaced "swapped it out" with "exchanged" to understand it better. So it would read, "I exchanged it for the Ninja I'd ridden to Bristol." That would mean he's now riding the Ninja. 😵💫
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MC (A Persnickety Peruser) wrote: "It is confusing! I had to read it several times to make sense of it. I replaced "swapped it out" with "exchanged" to understand it better. So it would read, "I exchanged it for the Ninja I'd ridden..."Thank you! This is what I thought too. The way it’s worded, he’d be riding the Kawasaki Ninja. BUT, the author has him riding his Yamaha in all the next scenes. 🙄🤦🏻♀️
Bronwyn wrote: "MC (A Persnickety Peruser) wrote: "It is confusing! I had to read it several times to make sense of it. I replaced "swapped it out" with "exchanged" to understand it better. So it would read, "I ex..."Really??! It was terrible how she worded that then. It's like you have a shirt, but you exchange it for a hoodie, because it has pockets. Now you have the hoodie. So how did this guy end up with the shirt? 🤔 🤷♀️
MC (A Persnickety Peruser) wrote: "Bronwyn wrote: "MC (A Persnickety Peruser) wrote: "It is confusing! I had to read it several times to make sense of it. I replaced "swapped it out" with "exchanged" to understand it better. So it w..."EXACTLY!!! Great way to explain it.
