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Thoughts after reading chapter 1:
- The opening is so bizarre. What a weird way to introduce characters.
- Ugh please stop telling, just show. Don’t say it’s a dangerous quest for a story, just show it is!
- What is Julianne doing?!? She told Dean she loves him and always has but then kisses Darryl after having a candlelit dinner with him?! I’m so confused. What game is this girl playing? I don’t like her.
— Jun 23, 2022 07:24PM
- The opening is so bizarre. What a weird way to introduce characters.
- Ugh please stop telling, just show. Don’t say it’s a dangerous quest for a story, just show it is!
- What is Julianne doing?!? She told Dean she loves him and always has but then kisses Darryl after having a candlelit dinner with him?! I’m so confused. What game is this girl playing? I don’t like her.
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