Rachel’s Reviews > Elemental Claim > Status Update

I’m surprised catalytic is even a word also who tf would choose it when cataclysmic is RIGHT THERE

I’m sorry… “their soft footsteps echoed loudly”???? Did the editor get to this chapter and just stop before finishing??

This makes me irrationally angry. What editor fucking signed off on this ????

So Jack, who identifies as male, is now going by she/her pronouns just because he took on the form of a woman? That’s mega confusing for absolutely no reason

You’re joking right….

This spice is extremely underwhelming. She came twice in the span of three paragraphs and he lasted all of three seconds and she came again. Also I swear if I hear her PANT one more time I’m gonna lose my mind.

ICE DILDO I REPEAT ICE DILDO

Rogan and Emma are so cute but I’m concerned by how slow the plot is moving given I’m over 50% done

SNUFFLES IM DYING POOR CERBERUS

ONE BED TROPE YES GIMME GIMME