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Mel
is 78% done
Yeah no, screw this. This protagonist is the worst. Spineless, mean, creating angst for no reason. Ugh. This is so frustrating to read. Silas deserves better.
— Jun 26, 2022 12:44PM
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Mel
is 64% done
I’m having a hard time finding the narrative tension here. So they’ve dated, they’re together… Met the friends for a movie night, but there were 0 stakes to that. I guess meeting Silas’s friend? Getting Trip’s comic published? They’re just… living their life together now, and I’m baffled as to what the 2nd half of the book is supposed to be about.
— Jun 26, 2022 10:36AM
