2percentright’s Reviews > Hunter's Prayer > Status Update

"He must have had a full clip."

How do you get it right a couple chapters ago and then fuck it up at the end?

"Blackness. I floated."

Oh thank goodness. She's actually suffering for her actions for once. Hope it sticks this time

each full magazine

Oh good. Somebody told her what they're actually called

"Can you help . . . me?”"

"No."

"nasal deterioration that would mean coke, for the smell of burnt metal that means meth. She looked pretty clean"

What are you talking about? You clearly described her as being on a bunch of cocaine. There's no reason otherwise to describe her fiddling with her nose

"Steel against Chaldean sorcery, one of the oldest enmities known to magic."

I don't think you understand how *new* steel is in the grand scheme of things.

"“I need protein.” I smothered the pancakes in butter and strawberry jam;"

'i need protein ' she says as she casually eats a couple hundred grams of carbohydrates and a small dip of protein