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The narrator (or just the author) uses unnecessary academic language just for the sake of it. Sometimes the new words are pretty cool, but saying “I saw no fellow Homo Sapiens”. Can’t tell if this is just characterizing the main guy as obnoxiously smug or if this is how the author prefers to write, but it’s kinda annoying to read.
— Jul 06, 2022 01:47PM
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“This exerted pressure on me, on my so-called soul, as it would have on the ‘soul’ of any fellow primate.” The writing……………… the writing is killing me.
— Jul 06, 2022 02:09PM
