Jennifer’s Reviews > My Heart Is a Chainsaw > Status Update

I'm not getting on with this. Not sure why, maybe it's because I don't like the main character but there doesn't seem to be a flow in the writing, making it hard to read. Is it because it's written in Jade's stream of conscious and she has no idea or consideration for those around her as she spews out her nonsense.
I love slasher films so I hope I cam get in sync in the next chapter or two. Please let this get better