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Taste of Marrow was so much better. Almost everybody's behavior is more plausible. Houndstooth is still a complete tool, but this second novella at least acknowledges his childish demeanor.
— Jul 12, 2022 05:20PM
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Lou Fillari
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Terrible prose. Everybody exudes a tough guy attitude but deep down they're all just big ole teddy bears. Page after page. And I did not feel for this relationship. They absolutely do not know enough about each other to have lasting feelings toward one another. They're still in the lust stage.
There's a joke repeated about ten times in these 133 pages. Stopped being funny after three. Grating. Lots of rolled eyes.
— Jul 10, 2022 03:02PM
There's a joke repeated about ten times in these 133 pages. Stopped being funny after three. Grating. Lots of rolled eyes.
