Misty Loreen’s Reviews > The Seven Hungers: Crimson King > Status Update
Misty Loreen
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So far I am impressed.
I enjoy the characters and the story started off strong.
My only critique is: becareful of meta knowlage that the writer knows but the the audience doesn't. Its easy for the author to assume the audience knows more then they do.
Also we entered right into a high intensity scene but the writing lacked some of the intensity, so the audience doesnt feel the danger as much as they should.
— Jul 27, 2022 07:13PM
I enjoy the characters and the story started off strong.
My only critique is: becareful of meta knowlage that the writer knows but the the audience doesn't. Its easy for the author to assume the audience knows more then they do.
Also we entered right into a high intensity scene but the writing lacked some of the intensity, so the audience doesnt feel the danger as much as they should.
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