Sakuko’s Reviews > Husband Material > Status Update

Ok, we are getting somewhere. All the wedding chapters were just supposedly funny shenanigans, with Luc being somewhat mean and Oliver being his inoffensively neutral persona and while I found the death and funeral quite a tonal dissonance to the weddings before, at least Luc and Oliver are actually talking to each other in a serious, meaningful way and there is some character development.

There is actually more private couple interaction in this part, but Luc is frankly a dick to him (and plenty other people) most of the time and Oliver is lifeless. I remember him a lot more spirited in the first book, or is that just my imagination?
Also, the first book was very good about accurately, but not explicitly, portraying the MCs emotions. I have no idea what either of them are feeling through most of this.

This part has at least some more couple interaction in it. It still feels a bit stilted, somehow. I don't get any genuine excitement about the wedding proposal, which is a shame.

When I read a second book about a couple, I want more of that couple. Not for half of the couple to go on a weird romp to find their best friend's fiance.
Get to some actual couply stuff, please, book?