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This book suffers from past-tensitis. Even things that could be delivered 'in the moment' are being described off as already having happened as the characters reflect and muse on events after the fact. I'm already extremely tired of it, and I'm sighing because everything about the premise is great--it's just the writing is killing it. I mean. In a bad way...
— Aug 05, 2022 02:20AM
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Aug 05, 2022 06:18AM
I know exactly what you mean! Show me, don't tell me!
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Right?! It's ugh sometimes. The world is so friggin' cool though, I loved a lot of the descriptions for things that made sense for him--without using 'Earth' vernacular. Really neat book, but the TENSES. 💀
