Sunny’s Reviews > The Marrow Thieves > Status Update

But having to learn everything through the filter of this particular protag is it’s own layer I’m not always able to fully appreciate.

but I have really enjoyed the way the other characters stories have been told, the way they are shown but then also told (and that they are meant to be told by the characters themselves) in a way that lines up to create more showing & not just “expo”

I just hit what feels like a significant turning point, so I want to record some thoughts - I think this story may have been better served by a different protagonist, bc the protagonist has that “adolescent boy written by an adult woman” feel (honestly don’t know the gender if the author)