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Hazal
is 9% done
aaahhhhh you dont use but and however in the same place!! did someone give this at least a once over before publishing? You dont even need a person to do it, just hit spellcheck on microsoft word!!
— Nov 12, 2014 04:56AM
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Hazal
is 40% done
im skipping pages. I keep hoping it gets better but its scattered and ill-written and I dont think ill be able to continue any longer.
— Nov 13, 2014 05:12AM
Hazal
is 8% done
terrible writing!! i keep getting winded, and im not even reading it aloud. three or four sentences are mushed into single paragraphs and the gramatical errors!! I feel like taking a red pen to it.
— Nov 12, 2014 03:24AM
Hazal
is 5% done
the author keeps substituting commas for full stops, there are whole sentences joined by commas, its irritating. < like so.
— Nov 12, 2014 01:48AM
