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Okay, it's not all crap, but it definitely has alot of issues. Skipping time, switching povs, killing important characters with one vague sentence, expecting readers to remember every character from previous books just by name, etc, etc, etc.
— Nov 16, 2014 10:19PM
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You know you need a better editor when in one scene Carly is yelling out Cassie's name, and a few chapters later Carly is surprised to learn her name is Cassie. Erm..
— Nov 16, 2014 03:35PM
