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Is it wrong that I don't want Becca to end up with Jeff?

The characters are all very "real" to me. I can hear what their voices sound like, and I can imagine what they might look like.

Almost halfway through the review copy, and the term hari kari has been used more than once. As a Japanese-American, this irritates me as the correct term is "hara kiri" which basically means "stomach cutting", in reference to suicide. I really hope it's been corrected in the final copy.