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David Torres
David Torres is 69% done
Kai's little goodbye is funny. It actually makes me laugh out loud. Chuck and kai are ,y favorite characters, and hinestly, Ember does a better job writing comic relief than actual characters.... I feel like an ass for saying this, but hinesty is the only way i can write a review.
Nov 18, 2014 11:05PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 88% done
I take back what i said. Chuck lied about. Eing better than cured and nit being able to die. Damn, doyle and I are so gullible.
Nov 19, 2014 10:04PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 87% done
Yeah! Doyle is a bad ass! Stuff like this is what i want to see in the book. This part is wel done. Up until the point to where chuck explains the cure. So now he has auto regenerative abilities from the cure. So instead of weaponizing a bunch of MZs, its logical to inject the cure to give trained skilled soldiers auto regenerative abilities
Nov 19, 2014 09:57PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 86% done
Ok edgar threatens to kill off doyls friends and family. Ok. I got no complaints. But what bothers me is that edgar is a DOCTOR. An intelligent man of science. I dont think he would threaten someone by sending a simple letter. A phone call or face to face confrontation would be more dramatic since it will show a sort of arrogance in the doctor
Nov 19, 2014 09:46PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 81% done
Ok. So now things are actually kind of cool.
Nov 18, 2014 11:51PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 72% done
How does chuck have the dormant virus inside him? I domt recall ny me tion of how he got it.
Nov 18, 2014 11:37PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 72% done
O_o" damn. 'Nuff said
Nov 18, 2014 11:18PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 68% done
Doyle is weak and DYING and all addy can thing of doing is jumping right onto doyle's zombie cane? Stong bond or not, thats the LAST thing that would be on their minds, and Addy shouldnt feel rejected if doyle says no to se ON HIS DEATHBED
Nov 18, 2014 10:56PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 68% done
So the bonding is a two way street? I understand diyle bonding, i mean hes a zombie. But addy? A human? Humans dont bond in a literal sense, so im not sure how i can just believe that both are bonded together like that out of the blue. This boom lacks some realism and logic. In my opinion.
Nov 18, 2014 10:51PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 66% done
How could the whole family draw their guns IN PUBLIC at a gas station and just drive away without having the police called or the employees at the gas station freak out??? -____-"
Nov 18, 2014 10:43PM
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David Torres
David Torres is 66% done
I do like the humor in this book. Like the gretchen's overprotective mother bear compulsion "They're bad people russel. They stole my baby! Who does that? I'll tell you who, people that needs blowing up, that's who" Even though this made me laugh this is also an example of unnecessary repetition, which is a pet peeve of mine,
Nov 18, 2014 10:37PM
Of Royal Descent (The Doyle Hawthorne Series, #1)


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