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Katlyn
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“Father smiles. He pulls Trevor and Foster into his lap and smiles.” The writing in this book is so repetitive and I’m only ten pages in!
— Sep 06, 2022 04:57PM
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Katlyn
is on page 129 of 213
“Maybe we are all-the-sudden twins.” There it is again!
— Sep 07, 2022 08:34PM
Katlyn
is on page 85 of 213
Another typo! An E is missing in Claire. Did anyone proofread this book?
— Sep 07, 2022 12:01PM
Katlyn
is on page 64 of 213
“I don’t know why, but somehow, all the sudden, it seems like I could get away in the Ironton County Mobile Library on Wheels.” The same grammatical error again!
— Sep 06, 2022 06:23PM
Katlyn
is on page 57 of 213
I’m not super familiar with mobile libraries, but it seems unlikely to me that Patrick would be able to lend books to Kyra without at least knowing her name. How is he supposed to encourage people to return books without knowing their contact information, much less their names?
— Sep 06, 2022 06:13PM
Katlyn
is on page 10 of 213
“All the sudden, I’m excited too.” Oh look, a grammatical error only ten pages in!
— Sep 06, 2022 04:58PM
