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Mallika
is 18% done
Im giving up. Much as I want to read this, it's a sturggle for me and Im not connecting to the writing. Maybe the excess of exposition is killing it for me, taking me out of the story before it has a chance to take hold. A pity, I would have loved to read this through.
— Sep 17, 2022 03:20AM
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Mallika
is 14% done
I found the concept interesting and have been trying to work my way though the admittedly heavy initial reading in the hope the plot, like a steam engine starting from a cold start, will pick up speed.
— Sep 16, 2022 06:18AM
