Collaroy’s Reviews > The Flaw in Our Design > Status Update

Only 4 pages in and thanks to some heavy-handed info-dumping, you already know the MCs backstory, the main chip on her shoulder, her 3 brothers' jobs and ages, the town and its social injustices, the fact that her mother died when the MC was 15 and that her father is a kind, loving man. That does not bode well... but we'll see.