~My Book Obsession~’s Reviews > The Alien Mating Trial > Status Update
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is 50% done
At times it seems like a doctor wrote this book with some of the words used.
— Sep 28, 2022 04:44PM
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~My Book Obsession~
is 90% done
Either I missed it or it was never explain but how does becoming king work?
— Sep 29, 2022 10:42AM
~My Book Obsession~
is 70% done
There needs to be more world building. Draw us in with the world so we can feel like we’re there. Right now I don’t care if they leave or stay. Tell more about the main female characters. Tell how the world works how a king becomes a king and so on.
— Sep 29, 2022 06:59AM
