Kioyte’s Reviews > Heads You Lose > Status Update
Kioyte
is 63% done
Ok it's a peeve of mine... If you are going to talk about guns in your book damn well know how to use them. If you have a revolver, you do not have a clip and it's a magazine. I know its common to say clip...but still...don't. Also please please have continuity. If you write that somebody turned the lights off then you send another character in the lights shouldn't be on.
— Oct 02, 2022 10:17AM
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Kioyte
is 38% done
Enjoying the book overall. Having the uncorrected proof is interesting. I'm also enjoying the dialog back-and-forth between the authors. What I'm not enjoying is David Hayward's writing style and much like Lutz, I'm getting frustrated with him. As a Quasi writer myself, while I'm all about not talking down to your audience I also don't think that it's wise nor is it good for the book to be purposely pretentious.
— Oct 01, 2022 11:03PM
