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Only a few pages in and already have notated several sentences and paragraphs starting with And. While this doesn't generally bother me, to see so many at the start of a book is off-putting, as surely a storyteller should be adept at conjuring any handful of more suitable descriptors or sentence starters. However, so far the story has entranced me. This is just my own opinion.
— Oct 05, 2022 03:06AM
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