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Bronwyn
is 40% done
I could do without all the descriptions of the boring “castle” ruins they keep visiting. I’d rather have interaction between the two MCs instead of reading about these ruins.
— Oct 16, 2022 11:32AM
Bronwyn
is 10% done
So these guys are military men and it’s soon after DNDT was repealed, but they still have to be super careful and sneak around. But here they are, outside one of the guys’ apartments, leaning against the door and he’s giving the other one a blowie! How is this being careful??? 🙄
— Oct 14, 2022 08:16PM

