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Katsuro
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Apparently the main characters are only now learning the name of the suspect they investigated twice before. There is no reason why they shouldn't have learned his name already.
— Oct 17, 2022 05:46AM
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Katsuro
is on page 86 of 253
It says that when the protagonists were eating, "they let the food silence their mouths" (an old Swedish saying), but right afterwards comes this:
"'Hall', Fylking interrupted. 'You've got a damn nice place.'"
How can he interrupt if nobody's talking?
It's just another sign of how little thought this writer has put in her phrasing.
— Nov 03, 2022 01:35PM
"'Hall', Fylking interrupted. 'You've got a damn nice place.'"
How can he interrupt if nobody's talking?
It's just another sign of how little thought this writer has put in her phrasing.
Katsuro
is on page 48 of 253
The writer commits pretty much every amateur error I know of. Poor grammar, spelling and punctuation; describing one character's thoughts in a scene that's meant to be from another character's point of view; character actions that make no sense...
— Oct 16, 2022 02:51PM
Katsuro
is on page 11 of 253
This is the worst novel I have read in years. Not exaggerating. Updates will follow.
— Sep 06, 2022 10:04AM
